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for A sultry evening

by MissVixen

person Anon
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person ?
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
some bad spelling in there, but other than that good fic!
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seriously that was a cheap porno it sucked...
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Bee,

Unfortunateley Englisch is not my first language...I'm still learning it.
And this was my first story.
But thanks for the compliment...
person Bee
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is English your first language? If you would just have someone read over your work and edit your grammatical and spelling errors this would be amazing. It was a great start though.