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by Consternatio

person jeazard
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I figured I might as well read all the "one shots that aren't one shots" to this point and then make a combined review; short version: I LOVE your stories. A lot! :D

I'm sensing a touch of pronoun hell though; personally I don't think that Jack would think of himself as a " former time agent" that often, because he's not at ease with that part of his past.

Aside from that! You had me squealing in delight at the Dom/sub thing. Damn predictable kinks, but that was fucking hot! And "Amends" was sweet, just what I though he two of them needed. :)
Thank you for writing these beautiful stories!
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow and hot damn. I await some sequel to this because now I WANT TO KNOW. Damn you for your good writing... wait, no, praise, yes, praise you for your good writing! Let there be more of it!
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read this entire series and really enjoyed it! Especially the later stories, where you really start to explore the emotions as well as the sexual possibilities. By itself, the sex is hot and gorgeously described, but when you add the developing dom/sub relation between the Doctor and Jack -- well, it becomes absolutely sublime. Being a sucker for both bondage and men comforting each other, my favorite moment was Jack's panic about being tied up with the ribbon, and then what came afterward. Masterfully done. (No pun intended!)

Any change that you'll add more stories? I really wish you would!

Love,
Falcon
person Loki
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This just gets better and better. I'm loving the vibe here - sexy, sweaty and dare I say sweet? Fantastic as always. Bad news though...I'm pretty sure I spotted a plot forming in there. Looks like you have it under control and it's got a ton of potential, and considering how many smutty PWPs you've already delivered I think it's safe to say you can run with this one and it's gonna be great! You go! *Waves pom-poms*

~Loki
person Spirit Melody
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love these stories, and I love that (hot though the sex is!) you are linking them together with progressing emotions and revelations. Now I really need to see where this one is going to go... ;)