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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey thats really good 4 the start i really do hope theres more to come coz i liked it
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A promising start, I suppose, but way too short to post. Something has to happen to get the reader interested.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue with this story!!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was getting soooooo good! when ya gonna review
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oops sorry i meant continue
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it going. This story has good potential, just give us more content in each chapter since that was a bit short. I look forward to seeing more, good job.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story!