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for Hidden passion

by Eleriya

person Xtreme17nc13 [to lazy to log in]
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Er.. WOW! I never really pictured those to together, but it was great! So hot and just GUH! Heh. Lovely! But may I ask... What was the "dare" you speak of? Hmm... Lol, loved it!

--Ashlee
person Kat
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... Jack on top... I've never imagined that... it was hot... congrats! MORE
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tis I, the Unmentionable and Unreasonable Finky, here to review your story. Well, Finky (I being Finky) thought it was a fine story and...really hot. I LOVED it how Jack was the dom, i can just see him being like that...hehehe...

I remeber the FIRST time I saw Will & Grace...it was so long ago, yet NOT SO long ago...*sigh*

Anyway, great story, if not a WEE bit OCC. Loved it!

XOXOXO Cheers XOXOXOXO
-FINKY
person Danny
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, that was a hot story! I've been waiting for a Will/Jack pairing and it's finally here. Thank you so much. You should definately write more.