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by manuramone

person SisterErotica
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was difficult to read due to the poor spelling and grammer. I'm sure that if you corrected these problems then it might be a good story.
person AAdams
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please have someone who actually SPEAKS ENGLISH review before you post this trash! The idea was cute, but totally ruined by the phrasing, grammar, and punctuation errors.