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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes.. please put up part two!! That would be away.
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do Keep posting the story here, Im suprised that there is only two regular reviewer's, one of which has gone... overboard in reviews, but the story is good, keep writing and posting it.
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
According to the news, adding to the site has been disabled until March 1. I'll post here once it's back up. I happen to like my long-winded reviewer. :)
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes load it here
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah new chap keep it going
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of course we want you to post it here. I think that I understand why posting here is better for you than FF.n as they do not allow song lyrics. Pretty strange if you give credit where credit is due. If you are not going to post it here, would you let us know where you are?
Mike.
Mike.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
like the new chapter what were those stange weapons that she did not reconize i was just woundering
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay.. I'm reviewing!! Great chappies!! Hope there's the next one soon! Please keep up the amazing writing! You are so talented!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this story. I hope that Jacob improves in time in his Granddaughter's eyes, but it will take a lot of work on his part. I got a little confused as to weather Jack was involved in tricking her to use her powers. I really hope for a lot less strife in her life. There is no way that Jack would let his child fight. None at all.
Thank you for writing.
Mike.
Thank you for writing.
Mike.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you want a review hers one i love it its great keep the chapters coming