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Are you going to continue on with this story? I can't wait to see how they handle the aftermath of this. Please hurry and post the next chapter, or the next Monk and Natalie story. You are doing a wonderful job.

Thanks for sharing,
SpaceCadet

When are you going write a followup story to this one. We need to see what happens next, or even when they wake up the next morning, realizing what they have done. Does it continue? Please let me know when you have the next story.
Thanks for sharing your talent.

Very good depiction. You captured these characters perfectly. If they ever did become intimate, this is a plausible scenario.

Good work!

dkh1066

*pantpant*

That was so good! Drooled over all the tactile/physical descriptions. The sexual tension was awesome all the way through. Thanks for giving us some lovely Monk/Nat.

Yay! Someone brave enough to try their hand at a Monk lemon! You made a good job of it too! Keepup the good work!

All I can say is I AM A FAN! OMG, I'm dying here, that was so utterly hot and so utterly in character. Writing it from two perspectives was brilliant and gorgeously done. The final chapter was the hottest yet, and the ending was fabulous -- I was crying, lol! Now, if only they'd produce this for real... I'm definitely marking this as a favorite! Thanks so much for the wonderful writing, great spelling and grammar, vivid imagery, staying so well in character; I can't think of a single thing about this that could be improved upon! I gave it five stars.

i love your story so much .... it'hard to imagine a MR.MONK like this.....he took the initiative in the last chapter...he is so romantic....hope to see something more..

amazing. the situation was as unlikely as it would have to be for these two to get together. very strange and funny, not to mention terribly romantic

Natalie and Adrian Rock!!

That was such a good story. I hope you write more. I like how well it was written and the fact that it wasn't just all about sex it really had substance to it, well done.