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for Upon Awakening

by falcongirl

person JMc.
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is great stuff! Very hot and very sweet too, but please, please, please finish the story! I'd love to read about Gil pleasuring his sweet Sara as she did him in this sexy fic!
person JMc.
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lordy, Lordy, girl you can't stop this delightful story there! Please write the second half to this! I'm left sitting here with my tongue hanging out in anticipation!
person cshighland
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh. Very nice. I read this first thing this morning and wish I could wake up that way myself... Hell, with Griss OR Sara!

Nice job! Write more!

CS
person committed
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story. A nice, sweet conversation followed by some great smut. I really enjoyed reading it.