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for Death in the Mountains

by AtanaBlackfox

schedule January 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Up to chapter 11. Loving the interactions of the animals with each other and with the humans. The conclusion of this chapter was very satisfying.
schedule January 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
up to chapter 8 I love Sam's vision for Dean and the animals are just plain adorable.
schedule December 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Up to chapter 7. I like how you portray Dean. His personality is true to the show and the new situations your story is putting him in.
schedule December 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 3 and am really enjoying this story. Looking forward to reading more!
person PurpleFigment
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Just stopping in to say hi and let you know that I keep checking in to see if you have posted more yet. I am truley addicted to your story and will wait as long as it takes for rl and your muse to allow you to write more and finish this wonderful piece.
Thanks so much for under taking it.

Happy Holidays,
PF
person purplefigment
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Just wanted to let you know that I'm still checking back on a regulare basis to see if you have added any new chapters. You do know that your story is addictive don't you ?

Thanks for writing again,
PF
person Valerie
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am reading your story "Death in the Mountains" and thought it was very good. Would you please let me know when you think you might be finished with this story and maybe how many more chapters you think you will be writing on it.

Thank you and keep up the good writing.
person PurpleFigment
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was sooo happy to see part 26 posted. As a much more unaccomplished writer than you are, I know how much work you are putting into this story, plus there is rl to consider, but I ca't help myself from wanting more and wanting it now - the wanton little ff addict that I am

What a chapter - Jay's familiar: hey he came to Sam and Sam brought him home, what's with this lack of trust??? Even if they do have baggage? Who doesn't in this story anyhoo?

And more trouble brewing??? yipes!!! (angst, h/cfest near ???)

Hawaii - no don't take 'em away, I can't bring myself to trust any of these political yahoo's, no matter the affiliation. I'm confused and talk about coming with baggage...

Love to see both Sam and Dean coming into their own.

The way you're going this may end up being the longest ff ever online - Way to GO!!!

Thanks again,
Nora
person purplefigment
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not really a review just my thanks and what I hope are positive thoughts from a mind just out of the hospital and on narcotics.
I'm glad you are feeling better = thanks to surgery I got to read your WIP. I'm finding it a great read. You havd don a good job molding an AU/x'over/OC's and I really feel left at a cliffhanger moment here. I seem to have found a "good" time to start reading. I love ther area, local characters, twist to the back story, closure to things we've seen on tv... I'm a little off with the big hunting "conglomerates" and ploitics, but I guess it only makes sense. Plus it's your story, a labor of love and free entertainment for me - I'm not criticising that part of the story line, I just had a harder part working it in my mind.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing. I hope real life and your muse allow for more soon.
person wishdragon
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just readed chapter 25 i love the way you are bring this story together. i cann't wait for the next chapter. hope it will be soon. you are a very very good writer and i enjoy this story alot. wishdragon