rate_review Reviews

Wow, I am totally in love with this story. It's so well written. I hope you will be able to update soon!

I've had past thoughts on a Lex/Chloe relationship, but never actually ventured into it completely. I'm glad I took a gander tonight. Excellent read. May you have plenty of inspiration!

Wow, you write Chloe and Lex so well! I hope you add more.

Wow!
I really love this. I felt that you captured their dialogue so well!

Good job and please, please continue for my sake!

-Al

Holy Hell!! Best flipping Smallville story ever. I'm seriously dying to read your next chapter. You seem to have the characters down to an art form. The dialogue and expressions are so true to everyone, especially Chloe and Lex. Btw, that whole scene where she was pretending to be Lionel Luthor was frickin hilarious.
...Update soon!

I really love your concept for this story. It could be improved in a couple of ways though. For example, you have a couple of spelling and grammatical errors throughout the chapters (i.e. in chapter three "vile" should be spelt "phial." And I would love it if the chapters were a bit longer too.

I really enjoyed chapter two though, when Chloe acted out what happened with Lionel by only impersonating what he said to her. It was very dramatic and an excellent way of communicating to Lex that she was actually in danger. I hope you keep writing this because it's amazing so far.

Enough angst! We want smut!!!! Good build up.....