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by vinsmouse

person John
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start up chapter, poor vin, he's scared but at lest he knew he was safe with them. It's damn hard what he went through, but they're gonna help him, he's in good hands now. *hugs* Take care, John N
person john
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good ending, a bit short, but it's good. Poor Vin again, he really suffers so well it tears at you're heart the way he does it. Sweet little kid you know. Good thing the way the others are there for him, and I Really like how Buck comes out. He's always very protective of JD and Chris in the show, but here it comes out how he is the same to all of them. Vin is damned strong and I guess some might be surprised he'd need so much help, but it was well done, no very odd spellings, ;) Take care now, *hugs* John