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for Platonic Love

by GreenCat70

person KCDDMR
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes I have to say this one is one of the "more real" Griss/sara moment. more believable anyways. Excellent work!
person Annie
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can,t wait to see where this story is going, but could you tell us how sara actully managed to get Grissom into her bed and into his soul. Good use of vocabulary love the descriprion of jealosy I have never really experienced thet type of jealosy it sounds painful. I will await your next chapters I will review as I can

Annie