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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A good story over all, although some parts were a little overdone. Also, the ending part with Desmond hugging Jack and then taking out a rabbit were very out of character.
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really gooooood!!!! You got teh characters down pat! Great dialogue and detail, liek on how Jack is alway sa bit wierdo and distant. Silly Jack. lol. Anyways, great story, please continue if you were planning to!
Oh no.. spoilers! Shannon dies?!?! waaaaaaahhhhh....
I'm still on DVD Disc 2 of the Second Season...
... awesome story!!
Oh no.. spoilers! Shannon dies?!?! waaaaaaahhhhh....
I'm still on DVD Disc 2 of the Second Season...
... awesome story!!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pplleeaassee update!!!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you going to continue? i hope so...
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good please write more