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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very sweet I really enjoyed it ^_^
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was so cute...and real cute. I can see the time you put in this, and I'm here to say "You did a good job" *pats head* This is a flame-resistent fic!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, that was excellent. Very-well written, and it evoked all the right emotional responses. And you say English is not your first language; I am impressed at your handling of it. For a bit of constructive criticism, only one bit of punctuation is needed to end a question.
For example:
"Ask a question," said your first character.
"You want me to ask you a question?" your second character replied.
See?
Of course, I'm speaking American English. Judging by the way you spelled some words, you stuck with the British version, which is fine. I don't know how they do punctuation over there, but I still think you did an excellent job. Very well done.
For example:
"Ask a question," said your first character.
"You want me to ask you a question?" your second character replied.
See?
Of course, I'm speaking American English. Judging by the way you spelled some words, you stuck with the British version, which is fine. I don't know how they do punctuation over there, but I still think you did an excellent job. Very well done.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*tehehehe*
hab se nun schon zum 2. mal gelesen und: danke~~~~~~! *___*
Gibbs und Tony sind so toll...vor allem zusammen... aber es gibt so WENIG GibbsxTony Fics *mal zumindest noch nicht viele gefunden hat*, was sehr schade is T_T
umso schöner für mich, deine gefunden zu haben.
Süß und lustig und fluffich und einfach ha~~~ch *_*
baba Lithi ^^/)
hab se nun schon zum 2. mal gelesen und: danke~~~~~~! *___*
Gibbs und Tony sind so toll...vor allem zusammen... aber es gibt so WENIG GibbsxTony Fics *mal zumindest noch nicht viele gefunden hat*, was sehr schade is T_T
umso schöner für mich, deine gefunden zu haben.
Süß und lustig und fluffich und einfach ha~~~ch *_*
baba Lithi ^^/)
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was friggin awesome, very sweet at the end, but I love the whole you sure as fuck aren't gibbs thing, that was awesome, much love
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
giggles hysterically. I loved the ending. So cool. And the way that you had Tony confront the fake Gibbs was great. I really loved it. It took me a minute though to figure out who the guy was that Tony had killed since I haven't seen that ep in a while. I can't wait for this series to come out on dvd. Anyways, awesome story. Loved it very much. Hope to see more of your stuff soon.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, awsome, amazin and really really great! Loved it! Loved the way you portrated the characters realationship, the way they compleated each other. One of the best stories I've gotten the opportunity to read in a long time.
Looking forward to a sequel or/and a new story
Looking forward to a sequel or/and a new story
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! A great mixture of funny and sweet. I hope you write more in the future.