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for Deadly Temptation

by angela9in

schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, what can I say? I knew you'd write the perfect ending. Resolution that just takes the excitement, pain, torment and hotness of the previous chapters and gives it a peaceful and realistic ending. I really appreciate the time and effort you've put into this, it's been a pleasure to read. I absolutely love that the old Dean is coming back, and with it the old Sam/Dean relationship. The journey they've been on in this fic has taken them quite far away from canon, so it's great to see them almost reunite with their past selves whilst still not forsaking what they've been through. I'm so gutted that it's over, and yet I don't feel like it ended too soon if that makes sense.

Is there any chance you have the whole fic in one document? I figured it was worth asking before I copy and paste every chapter. If not, don't worry, I'm just looking for an easy way of doing it.
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Reading this has been pretty fucking amazing. We're talking a whole shit load of emotions, reactions, daydreams, squeals, edge of the seat moments and a million other things my poor brain can't articulate. I go back every so often to read a random chapter and I'm amazed at how the story and characters have progressed. Part of me worried as it went along that it'd go a way I'd somehow dislike. Feels stupid admitting it now, because I've come to learn that you can do whatever the hell you like and still sell me on it 100%. As it happens, this is what I think I would consider a perfect yet realistic ending, or rather, it's shaping up to be as you're promising an epilogue. I just absolutely love so many things about this fic. You'll forever be the one person who actually made me like original characters. Your ability to give them a personality and make them come alive is a rare one. I love the darkness you brought to Dean and Sam, without losing sight of who they are. Even after everything, there is something in every chapter that reminds us of who they are. The fact you kept John pretty much the same, as a contrast to the constant change going on around him. I love dark!John fics, don't get me wrong, but in this it made it so much more realistic that he stayed the same while Sam developed a darker side. This has been a fic I can revisit over and over again and one I will always remember. I look forward to the epilogue as I have every chapter, though I am incredibly sad it's over.
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this is THE BEST fic EVER.


schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I'm so proud of Dean for fighting it and I think the same goes for Sam, he's finally finding a balance between his feelings for Dean. Dare I hope things are going to turn out okay for our boys? Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeals at the new chapter* Oh my God, I could totally see this scene playing out and I swear my heart stopped longer than it should have, but it was so worth it! I'm kinda sad to see Christian gone, but then that's how things have to be. Cannot wait for the last two parts!!!
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you continue to construct a story that is sexy, yet contains substance! I anxiously await every new chapter! Please keep writing, I love your work! This is definitely one of my all-time favorite fanfictions.
person Cindyip
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its been so long since I read this, I forgotten how good it is. More please:)
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Dean, torn between two lives and fitting into neither. Yay for the return of Brian! Sam's dream/vision does not bode well for our boys. And a million more reasons why I loved this chapter and can't wait for more!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now *that* was hot! Loved the scene with Brian, lol. Christian is evil in the best way possible. Poor Dean, he doesn't stand a chance with all these sexually aggressive hotties lusting after his ass.
person pywacket
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I read this story in one sitting-it is amazing. Gonna have some good dreams tonight for sure.
thanks for all the hard work and can't wait for the update.