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Aww. ^ ^ That was such a sweet story. lol I like how he quoted the poem in the end..and kissed him. XD

OMG i loved it the poam was good please keep it going there needs to be more tommy/mertion dirtyness ^_^

Very, very sweet, and a lovely short read. Wish there was more of this going around. ^^

I wanted to comment on how well written this is! Keep up the incredible work! I can't wait for more ^-^

i liked it.......it was cute *smile*.......okay, constructive criticism......*runs fingers through hair thinking*.......hmmm........i guess it seemed a little rushed, but i can't really blame you for that......i mean, i do it, too, sometimes........also, the characters seem a little too ooc in some parts........i could see merton doing the poem, but i can't see him just running out like that........i think that he'd be more blushy and then sit through class trying to make it appear that he had nothing to hide in the poem.......try to make it seem like he didn't do it about tommy/some secret love affair........of course, merton would be trying too hard (as only the kawaii gothy-boi can) so tommy would become convinced something was out of it...........he'd probable try to "sneak"-figure out was going on, then he'd use force because he was frustrated.........that would be when merton ran away, but i'm not sure if he'd cry in front of tommy, and i think he'd be one of those silent weepers who doesn't notice/want to admit that they're crying.........when force didn't work, tommy would then go to lori and realize that she had the answer all along........then he could work on calming merton downaround him, then woo him........sorta gently at first, though...........omg.......*tear* i didn't mean to make it sound like i hated your's or anything.........i lurved it.......there's not enough tommy/merton smut put there (try none).........i was just giving my idea of what would have happened.......please try to understand that this is in no way a flame, and i am truly a fan of this here fic..........thank you.........well, until you decide to write another one! *huggles* ja ne and love as thou wilt!


p.s. what if merton and tommy kick some monster ass in your next story, and all that ass-kicking and near-death experience-ness caused them to be.......rambuntious.....horny if you will........and th only thing around is merton's hearse! yes! that would be a little smutty one-shot for the ages.........or it could go on for a while, with them doing it all over town.......*wink* sorry, sometimes my immagination just runs away with me...........

well, loveles!

-kitkattcassy <3

Write more!!

Oh pls continue....pls..pls...i used to watch this show everytime it was on and i always thought both tommy and merton were extremely hot!!!!...pls continue i cannot wait to see what happens

i want more T_T and your other ficcy too

x3 zack