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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was very HOT!!!! Need cold shower....
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow what a Hot story I loved it
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. I loved your characterizations and your use of words. Funny enough...it was kind of refreshing to actually see the word "penis" **trying to be mature and not to giggle** instead of some of the more colorful terms...
I am so looking forward to your future endeavors. Cheers.
I am so looking forward to your future endeavors. Cheers.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm all wound-up! Great characterization - well done:)
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was beautifully written. The emotions of both Grissom and Sara were so vivid and moving. Looking forward to reading more from you.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. I don't generally review on aff.net because well, in all honesty, most of the stories are kind of... blah. But this was fantastic. I love when people can take all of the emotions, the sensations, the words, the fears, the love... and mesh it together so wonderfully into a piece. Great job with this, I really enjoyed it.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this. I've never thought about them losing control like that...very descriptive. --Sassy