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February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was nice. Well written.
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad! He needs to stop dreaming about his feelings for her and do something about it!
Please continue! PLEASE!!!
Please continue! PLEASE!!!
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was....beautiful. Very well written, the smut wasn't too much and the characters were believable. Well done!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! ;)
VERY good story! Very, VERY good story!
VERY good story! Very, VERY good story!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! That was...exactly how I'd like to see Mal and 'Nara get to it for real. Love this bit: "Every part of her clung to him. Her arms, her eyes, her mouth. Oh yeah, this was exactly what he thought it would be like to be the center of her 'verse. And damned if he couldn't get good and settled here. " It's poetry and very lovely. You've got a nice talent for catching their voices well, and for giving descriptions of the action that follow well. How about some more? Anything this good needs to be added to, or got any more ideas for other fics? How about something with Jayne and Kaylee on an NC17 vein? But heck, anything you write would be nice and shiny. Thanks!