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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really Good write a sequeul
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn this story is sooooo good i love it please update cuz that last part was hott and they didnt even go al the way i can only imagine what it will be like when they do go all the way.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh, that was really good. just a hint though- dont say how big a penis, is. its tacky and doesn't sound good. other then that great job.
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really hope you update soon....everyone loves this storie
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon sweetheart i really like this storie
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, you're the one that wanted the reviews...
This is horrible. No real plot, unrealistic, a piece of shit.
And gee, my review was more than 15 words! Happy now?
-Nikki
This is horrible. No real plot, unrealistic, a piece of shit.
And gee, my review was more than 15 words! Happy now?
-Nikki
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys! Just letting you know there will be the next chapter in a few hours!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
crap didn't see that xD thanks all for reviews, new capter is going to HAVE to waituntil the weekend sorry :(
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made a boo-boo.
Spinner was at Spinners waist or something.
I laughed. I was thinking, "So he's going down on... himself? ... Odd..."
But it's good. Really good. Just a few typos here and there, but that's easily fixed.
Spinner was at Spinners waist or something.
I laughed. I was thinking, "So he's going down on... himself? ... Odd..."
But it's good. Really good. Just a few typos here and there, but that's easily fixed.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
johhny-boi....update soon!!!!!i luv this fic