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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a steaming pile of pointless crap. Do the internet a favor and strangle yourself with your mouse cord right away.
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. This is the worst fanfic I've seen for quite some time.
Please delete it right away.. STOP RAPING THE ENGLISH LANGAUGE
Please delete it right away.. STOP RAPING THE ENGLISH LANGAUGE
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nothing wrong with Lizzie having sex with her brother: don't be discouraged by flamers like that. However, it is way too short, with little description to get us interested, and what happened when Miranda and Gordo arrived? Looking forward to more.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No offense, but this story sucks.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LONFWE
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was pointless. Try getting a plot. You clearly just wanted to voice your sick fantasy of Lizzie and her BROTHER having sex. That in and of itself is disgusting. How old are you? Probably not even old enough to be on this site. Get a beta, get a clue, and try again.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad
MAke it a little longer and a little more descriptive and it will be much better
MAke it a little longer and a little more descriptive and it will be much better