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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* THis is a beautiful piece. I tend to think Wash would be glad to know Zoe's being taken care of. I think after the events of "War Stories" he'd trust Mal that way. ^_^ Good Job
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hay I just read your fic it's great but one things wrong with it......IT'S NOT DONE!!!!! Please write more I got to know what Mal things of his night with Zoe and anything else you can thing of. PLEASE!!!! Thank you...... and I thought it was well done.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is nice and shiny. We need more stuff written about Zoe after losing Wash. A good way to grieve, you know? I like how you put this, liked the voices of the characters. You do great work! Please do write the next chapter, and could you hurry up? I like this and want to see more. Keep flying!
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with another reviewer that Zoe's accent isn't so, uh, deep. And I can't see her musing this much either. She's a complex character, but I don't see her having 'long' thoughts. They would be pretty brief. That said, this is pretty good. I'm interested in the end of Mal's thoughts so please continue.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think that Zoe's accent was so thick. She speaks a little more normal that most. Really only Mal and Janye speak in that manner.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truly beatiful and touching. Please post again.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice way to honor Wash. I miss him too! Please write mor.