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Wow! This is an amazing tale, and I'm so glad I found it. I love the idea of Lex finding a father worthy of him, and yet still being relentlessly haunted by Lionel, and of course I adore Lex and Clark together. Great story!

Just finished chapter 16. Story was great. I was expecting to be squicked because Clark was only 16 but I wasnt. I figure that when I read the story I picture the actors, and I know he isnt 16, so its all good.

Really enjoyed the AU.

the reason iv written this is because i love this story. plis do a sequel, i very interest in one.just know that I am from chile and i am no very good in inglish but i love this story so much. i have a question

lucien no is jealousy of clarck?

lionel is inferior that lex true, he is not the new ancendt only one solder?

pliss more cloe she is cool and more lana i hate her . go cloe/ die lana

i love the angel thing
more i need more is to good

weel mi name is selene i am sorry my capry english i am froom chile (speack spanish) but i love this story and i wanna the continuaccion plis


THANK YOU for read this strange reviw

ojala que entiendas español porque no soy muy buena en ingles pero queria decirte que amo tu historia y te queria preguntar si
¿lucien no esta celoso de clarck?

Great piece of work! Very unusual and intense! Bravo!!!

Absolutely brilliant, I have adored every second of this story while despising Johnathon and Martha. It is wonderfully well written and evokes many different emotoions, I can barely wait to read the next chapter and I hope it won't be long. I want to hear more from the AI and Arsay. This is a wonderful portrayel of Lex without managing to make the whole "Lex is really a good guy" thing seem cliche.

really hope u plan on updating soon

I just love LOVE this and am waiting patiently, but just so you know i really don't do patiently very well, for the next part.... WOW and so i just read all of this in one day... i really need to go work on RL :)

I read this story in one afternoon, I just couldn't get away from it. Luckily I have a laptop or else I wouldn't have been able to used the bathroom. So obviously I like it well enough, though I was a bit put off by the ooc Lex. And I'm not diggin' the Arc guys, it seems just a bit much for me, like they need they're own story. It gets muddled up in the Smallville Universe. Please update soon? Or just write the sex scene with no plot attached? I could go either or.


Good times and rock on,

Dom

Another fantastic chapter. You really have capivated me with this AU. I hope the next update comes swiftly.

absolutely great update, I am starting to adore Lucien!
this arc about GOOD vs. EVIL is absolutly fascinating!
and of course, yeah, Clark blowing lex is of course one of my absolute kinks , too..
I really hope, we get to know about the seemingly good players from the others side, too!