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for Under the Sea

by SandyJean

person D-Puppy
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Original Character or Sean. Craig's too prissy. Well bye! And I'm the oc vote! Yay...
person ???
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
like what you have added so far and its great but it seems to me that you already have the crush, mystery man, thing all worked out...it seems that it could be spinner he has a bit of a crush on then again if i had anything to say about it i think it should have to be....Craig
person coko
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!it's getting so good
this needs to be updated so bad!
please please please.i luv this storie
person D-Puppy
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe not Dylan since you even put, Marco's looking for something new. And No on Jimmy, Spinner's gotta hit him. But maybe you should add a character? Just a suggestion. And BRAVO on that stunning lesson. It was the right way to go. I enjoyed it. Well see you...Oh and maybe Craig or Sean.
person John
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey you should make the chapters longer!

Anyway, NO DYLAN HELL NO TO DYLAN I HATE DYLAN BLEH! I want it to be sean or craig!
person s and s blah
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
marco is lusting after jimmy thats why he was so depressed sounding when spinner told him that he like jimmy.

thanks for the entertainment
person Sarah
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is really good, please update asap ^_^ love ya!
person ernest
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was good i hope to read more soon
person Jack
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE BEFORE I KILL YOU!
person ???
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG....awesome just awesome...but why did you stop there.....more come on more..