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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it really too hard to write "at" and "and"?
I want to read this, but seeing "@, &" makes me too mad.
I want to read this, but seeing "@, &" makes me too mad.
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK first of no more @ sign, second thats not how the characters talk. You sound way to formal. Spinner messes up common phrases half the time, and now you having him talking all proper.
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really really good and I wanna see more soon! I loved the supense, but I am suprised at the rate things progress, it is a bit unrealistic, but whatever. It also suprised me every guy seems gay; don't tell me NO ONE has ever noticed this? anyways, more soon please!!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a really really really good story update update updat eu cant leave us all hangin like this
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww marco and sean is not as good as craige and marco. craige needs to come into the picture at one point. yay. nice work, love it
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats hot mayne JT can get involved and spice things up more update soon
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rwar!!lets get kinky!!
lol,please update soon!
i luv this fic
lol,please update soon!
i luv this fic
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats awesome i really do enjoy the story and i sounds as if it only going to get better....keep running with it.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a good start here - It would be a whole lot better if you didn't use the @ symbol instead of typing at. It's not that hard, it's only 2 letters!
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic Story. =P
I think Sean should be the mystery guy! Marco and Sean would be a cute couple, and least for this story. =)
Keep up the good work!
I think Sean should be the mystery guy! Marco and Sean would be a cute couple, and least for this story. =)
Keep up the good work!