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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Hot. That was a great story. This is definitely one of my fav YoBling's. It's belivable and sincere.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, but I have one small problem with it. "Cath." I'm totally fine with using "Cath" in dialogue, because many characters on the show call her that. However. Using it instead of "Catherine" when saying things like "Cath(erine) looked over to him and sighed", it doesn't work. Her name isn't "Cath," and in any story, it shouldn't be used unless in dialogue.
Besides that, great job, and pretty believable. ^_^ 4 outta 5
Besides that, great job, and pretty believable. ^_^ 4 outta 5
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! that was amazing.. first time i read a smut with a very believable angsty plot.. almost teary eyed now. I could feel the mixture of emotions between Cath and Warrick. The dialogue was just like their character on the show, its so believable. Sigh, I hope tptb will give us yobling soon. :)
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again you've done a great job! I loved it. I loved the storyline, if only you were a writer for the show. :D
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LUV IT SO GODDAM HOT!!!