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for It's Not Fair

by tentainokn

person Raven BS
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no!!!!!! please no cliff hangers! for the love of god please keep writing!!!! gah!!! so fucking hot!!!
*daydreaming....josh....joe!.....sex!!!!* ok... im done now but again please keep this story going...PLEASE!?!
love,
a very sick minded teen.
XXX
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING AMAZING!!! Please please please please please please please continue this. I love it.
person Angel Jade
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is so hot! Those two just look so pretty together. *sigh*
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
k
person Lory
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohmigosh *dies* Update again! oh dear this made my day!
person Lory
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update please! This is so damn great lmao!
person Siarra
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, cool. I never expected to find any slash in this fandom but this little fic left me pleasantly surprised.
The story so far is very well written, building up the tension and teasing the reader with the still slightly awkward chemistry between them. For some reason Harrison's characterization seems a bit odd, but I admit that it's been ages since I've last seen the show so my memory might be playing tricks on me. I'd be very delighted to see this story continued at some point, because what you have so far is very interesting.