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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Odd, but amusing. I'm pleased I found this... and I'm especially pleased with the grammar. Well-written stories are becoming harder and harder to find recently. Thank you!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've rated this a 5. It is extremely believable, and hot because it is subtle. This episode is one of my favorites, actually. Jan and Peter are two of my favorite characters, as well as one of my favorite pairings, because they look good together and have chemistry.
The quality of your writing is excellent. That's nearly impossible to find in fanfiction nowadays, and quite refreshing. Keep it up!
The quality of your writing is excellent. That's nearly impossible to find in fanfiction nowadays, and quite refreshing. Keep it up!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a GREAT story!And probably something that was on the minds of anyone who ever watched that damn show.The writing was excellent as well,and I really felt like I was at that party.Good job!!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel a little guilty for having found the sex scene kinda hot...I'm not a fan of underage sex, but you wrote it realistically enough that it didn't turn my stomach. XD This was pretty amusing at points, too, especially Lucy's plan totally failing on her.
And your characterization of Lucy was...unexpected. My interpretation of her is quite different.
And your characterization of Lucy was...unexpected. My interpretation of her is quite different.