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person mugglebourne21
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JUST A NOTE TO SAY THAT I JUST FINISHED EDITING CHAPTER THREE SO THAT IT DOESN'T SOUND AS MONOTONOUS ANYMORE. THANX FOR READING MY CRAP!!!
person DemonicCharmedOne
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LIKE I SAID IN CHAT SIMPLY HOT...I LOVE TO SEE TO MEN GO AT IT...I LOVE IT..ITS HOT..AND...STEAMY AND WOW...LOL VERY GOOD ENDING...GIRL YOU ARE DESCRIPTIVE...AND...I WISH I WAS A MAN AND YOU WERE A MAN..AND WELL N/M LOL
person Marie
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chap was hot…I would payyyyyyyyyy to see this on the actual show. :)~ One thing though. There was a sever over use of Clark and Lex’s names. It made the whole thing feel very rushed. Over all I’d give it three cold showers out of four. :)
person Marie
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hay, that was cool. I'm really looking forward to chapter two. I can't wait to see where this is going. When ever Lex says he rembers something in a fick I know theres a bomb waiting to drop. :) This was well written too. Update soon!
person Moni
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That...wow...it was very good...Description was so good I could picture the character even if I dont follow smallville. I enjoyed it cant wait for part 2 3 4 5 lol...WTG Muggle..Keep it up Girl!!!