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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Am I too late for a chocolate Jake? I'll settle for a Doctor.
Really good job, nicely executed. Not a thing I'd change. Keep em' coming!
Really good job, nicely executed. Not a thing I'd change. Keep em' coming!
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I quite enjoyed that. Even though the story mostly focuses on sex, you still manage to capture the individual personality of each character. The sex itself is vividly described, and I like the playful, affectionate tone that you achieve. All in all, a lovely story, that was a pleasure to read. Thanks!
Love,
Falcon
Love,
Falcon
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chocolate...Jack? WHERE?!? WHERE?!? *L* Naw. No worries.
I enjoyed this lil story quite a bit! Look what a little team work and determination can do? Nyeee hehe. Evil duo got thier wish! Nice job!
I enjoyed this lil story quite a bit! Look what a little team work and determination can do? Nyeee hehe. Evil duo got thier wish! Nice job!
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Probably the third or fourth time I've read this story, and it just gets better every time!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh, i've finished reading it all now. is that really the end??! please write more - i think i'm addicted. have you considered a threesome where jack is fucking the doctor while the doctor is fucking rose?? only you could write it!! ...... anyway, good work. now do i get a chocolate jack/doctor/rose/tardis?! mmm, chocolate.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've only read the first chapter so far, but I like it a lot. you write the characters and their relationships very believably. Nice.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That certainly was a good idea! How hot - gettin' one's freak on with the Doctor!
I love it!
I love it!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies*
wow......*reads it again*
*dies*
wow......*reads it again*
*dies*
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Thank you, thank you thank you for this!