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March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Will you ever be continuing this story, or have you given up on it totally?
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing, update soon.
ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so weird, I absolutely love it, and your writing is quite good as well. I'm sad to see that it hasn't been updated in so long!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WEll, from how long you've been on a hitus, i guess your not writing anymore on it, but so far it's been a great story, and i do how that you write more on it.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adored this. It was wonderfully written. Peter and Brady are my favorite and you are giving them the perfect amount attention. And the fact that they have that room and that portrait. Everything is wow. I hope to read more soon.
I like the growing tension, but I dislike Carol and Mike, especially if they were to interfere, so I hope that it stays simply as a tension. Although actually that wouldn't be the greatest. Whatever. Your writing is beautiful and I want to read more.
I like the growing tension, but I dislike Carol and Mike, especially if they were to interfere, so I hope that it stays simply as a tension. Although actually that wouldn't be the greatest. Whatever. Your writing is beautiful and I want to read more.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The truth is, I'm not really a Brady Bunch fan though I am familiar with the basics.
However, I am a huge fan of Martin Mystery, and have read Undercover Honeymoon.
The main reason I am reading this is because it seems like you intend to explore the social and psychological aspects of stepcest, rather than just the physical. From what I've seen so far, you might do a good job because you're an excellent writer. I also want to see how you tackle the issue of developing a sexual relationship without the use of supernatural elements.
I like reading Martin Mystery fanfiction. But I also like adult fiction that is written in a mature manner and stimulates the mind instead of focusing solely on the sex/violence/gore.
Would it help if I watched a few episodes of the Brady Bunch? I'm not sure it would. As it is, I can't really comment on how in-character everyone is or how faithful it is to the show. Sorry about that.
Maybe I can make up for it in the future by letting you know what I think of the sex scenes (I do like reading good sex scenes), and how well you're developing the plot, moving the events along, and pacing the characters' development.
I'd like to ask - do you have a soft spot for Peter/Jan? You seem to concentrate more on them, and less on Marcia/Greg, which I've been told is the more popular pairing. As for Mike/Carol, their relationship seems kind of cold. Is this integral to the story, or are you uncomfortable with writing about a sexual relationship between them? Let me know.
Also, I'd like to be added to your update list for this story.
However, I am a huge fan of Martin Mystery, and have read Undercover Honeymoon.
The main reason I am reading this is because it seems like you intend to explore the social and psychological aspects of stepcest, rather than just the physical. From what I've seen so far, you might do a good job because you're an excellent writer. I also want to see how you tackle the issue of developing a sexual relationship without the use of supernatural elements.
I like reading Martin Mystery fanfiction. But I also like adult fiction that is written in a mature manner and stimulates the mind instead of focusing solely on the sex/violence/gore.
Would it help if I watched a few episodes of the Brady Bunch? I'm not sure it would. As it is, I can't really comment on how in-character everyone is or how faithful it is to the show. Sorry about that.
Maybe I can make up for it in the future by letting you know what I think of the sex scenes (I do like reading good sex scenes), and how well you're developing the plot, moving the events along, and pacing the characters' development.
I'd like to ask - do you have a soft spot for Peter/Jan? You seem to concentrate more on them, and less on Marcia/Greg, which I've been told is the more popular pairing. As for Mike/Carol, their relationship seems kind of cold. Is this integral to the story, or are you uncomfortable with writing about a sexual relationship between them? Let me know.
Also, I'd like to be added to your update list for this story.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far. Please continue. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o .........oooooo update
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, please update soon
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is definitly the best Brady Bunch Fan Fiction I have ever read. And I'm serious too, you are such a good writer and the story somehow just works together really well. Please, Please, Please don't stop writing for this, I'm addicted! This is an awesome story. Kudos for you!
-Grace
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