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for Under His Skin

by cryptictac

schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was great! Heartbreaking, but great. Very well written.
person Lhyra
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a sad story. I hope it'll become better for James.
I Like the way you write. More soon please ;o)!
person LookFar
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Beautifully written and so sad. There's a certain density to your writing that is very pleasant.
person kos
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't habitually read stories in present tense, so the fact that I did is a great testament to your writing, and your interpretation of House/Wilson. I could totally see this happening, although I was hurting for Wilson, needing to be touched and to touch, and not getting that satisfaction. Yet still going back for more. I'm definitely going to scope out your other stories, this was great!
person Jen
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. Why haven't you got a zillion reviews for this? I loved it.
person PiCa69
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done. Beautiful sex and enough angst to -almost- bring a tear to my eye. Wonderfully written.
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really don't know what to say about this story. You caught something with this story, but am not quite sure. Have you thought about continuing or is it simply a one shot? I would like for you to continue it : )
person wonanee
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As one shot is perfect but I can't help hoping for a sequel if not for a happy ending...
person Jesus
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! write more!
person LadyRuby
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I like "Psudo" better, but this was a very interesting fic. Keep it up!