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for Unexpected Results

by falcongirl

person Anon
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet and sexy, great gsr, great, great, great!!!!
person Casandra
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. That's so sweet. Lovely smut dear.
person LK
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm completely puzzled as to why this hasn't had any reviews yet. Clearly, people just haven't found this gem. What a really great story. Thank you for giving us a nice little intro to the smut--stories are always so much more powerful when the smut is believable within the context of the story. Even your dialogue totally worked. The whole thing was very well written. I loved it. Nice job.