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for The God Within

by wildannuette

person Turiel Tincdaniel
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I'm liking this story quite a bit. I'm glad that someone is defending Strife. I didn't want to read this story initially only because it is not finished. I knew I would be jonesing for more! I was right! Keep up the writing! :-)
person Draco
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice Chapter.. I Hate cliffhangers but ALL stories have them damnit, I did read it the first day you put it out, but did not have the time to review.. I'm checking everyday for an update. Can’t wait for more Ares. Keep up the good fanfic writing.
person Kat_Tales
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! You have taken a much written about event and added a new twist!! I have no clue how I got into this pairing (C/S), but I know for a fact this is one of my favorites! I would like to know just how long this is going to be? Are you going to write beyond Stife's rebirth? If so, please don't rush it!!!! I can't care much for too many time jumps. Please update soon!!!
person Draco
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, I cant wait for the next part, Hurry Hurry I want the know what can't next.
person Newtype
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapters I must say, they seem very well thought out and nicely done. I espeshly enjoy the Goddess of Pregnacy and eth Unborn. . .she is a real knee slaper at times, like how she treated Hercules like a child. . .Oh daddy that was funny. I will look forward to more.
person Newtype
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the stroy. Very nice idea, please by all means possiable write more. I look forward to more parts.
person Saphirephoenix
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. The concept of culpability about the lack of mourning for Strife's death is a magnificent idea. Bravo! I have also noticed that Joxer ends up pregnant in a lot of fanfiction, but I like how and why you did it. Keep it coming, you're doing great.
person tresa (teadanni)
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please keep writing, I like your story line and the plot so far. I am a sucker for C/S and really hated it when they killed him. I am glad that you are giving him a 2nd chance. Long live Mischief, he rocks out. But please keep writing, I will keep checking for updates. @.< (winking w/ glasses)