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for Not A Prude

by elle6778

person charlie
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmm....yummy alec!! that was hot
person amniarix
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot, great extension piece on the mermaid girl story. like the banter and the serious playfulness.
person amniarix
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that story is so hot it shot out past Mars and did a few laps of Venus, and that was before the fourth chapter!!!!! Out of this world stuff and spine tingling. What a shame the shows over, when it can inspire writing like that. Great job.
person destiny
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brillant!!!
person Alana
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I haven't read and reviewed chapter three but I kinda forgot about this fic, anyway I absolutely love all of your fics, you're an awsome writer. Plz write more M/A fics cos you're so good at it! Loved this chapter btw, it was really awesome.
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's over?! how unfair! oh, if only you decided to write more m/a fanfics (hint, hint)

well, anyway, good job on this one. very nice :) heehee
person teetsie
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the smacking was really uncalled for, but I guess it's Max...
person Cidrouge
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. I like that they still have the playful banter between them and niether is giving an inch. Keep it up.
person Chelsea
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are one of my favorite authors, I love your stories. Keep up the good work.
person *Ro*
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH! MY! GOOOOOOOSH! That was amazing! Hot, sexy... I have no words to describe this chapter!
Please... More soon!

I have a question. Are they doing this just sex? Hope they have feelings for each other...

kisses,
*Ro*