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for The Nanny

by clawx

person Sweetie
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your kidding...Right?
person Mims
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just one word to describe this...GARBAGE!!!
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schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this seemed a bit forced. The flow was not all that good, the spacing was good. I don't really know why you thought about bring in some strange guy. I can understand the need for pointless smut. But this really needs to be re-worked or taken down. I'm sure you can do a lot better than this. Send this thing to the trash.
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoever said "genius" is about as intelligent as the writer. He, she or it can't spell and obviously wrote this just to get themselves off. Step away from the computer, pick up a camera and write for Hustler or something. Your writing leaves a LOT to be desired.
person a...
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u are soo sick... Fran would never do that! U sick Fuck!
person me
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Genius!
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was abosolutely HORRIBLE! No one should have given you access to a computer!