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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please finish this story! it has been great so far, i want to know what happens when they get back to Vegas...
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really don't think you need all that much of an improvment. Your writing is coherent and well thought out unlike some writes that I think should probably work a little harder. But your fic was great, including the smut part.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviewed cause I get to read it before everyone else (hehe) so I forget it's posted here. It's a great story and I'm lovin' the smut!!! Keep it up!
~Dara
~Dara
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...are you kidding me?!! Of course we love it, well from me DEFINITELY! Please update as soon as possible. :)
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. Yeah, we get to the smut! Love the honest beteeen the two, and the uncertainty. very realistic.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Please have chapter 2 up soon. What a beautiful story so far:)
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going your doing great job.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Grissom burning out is definitely a new twist! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh.....love the story so much!! I kind of know where it's going and very well told story. I know you said that it's going to be up to 3 chaps. Well, I HOPE NOT!! Cause I'm starting to like this story already. Please update. DOn't leave us hanging
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for this story ever since you mentioned it at YTDAW. You did not disapoint. Wonderfully realistic, you came up with the perfect case to hit all of Grissom's weak spots, and made it seem perfectly natural to show up at Sara's house. Can't wait to see what happens next. Long live GSR!