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Hi, I don't know if you will ever be updating this story but you definitely should. You're an excellent writer and this fic is one of my favourites.

love this fic please update

This story is incredible!That's writing!

This story is incredible. I like how you've taken the possibility to her past to a whole 'nother level that most wouldn't expect. Your ideas and wording are spectacular. I can't wait for chapter 5, Thanks.

Angel-

I'm really enjoying this story. I have to admit that I'm reading it as more of an original fiction piece, rather than a CSI fanfiction story. I'm having trouble connecting this torturous, detailed past with the character of Sara on the show--BUT--having said that, your writing is so wonderful that I don't care if it has anything to do with CSI. This is such a very intricate, carefully woven story. I love the fact that there are deliberate gaps in the story that leave us wondering about things--it's a quality that I often associate with published novels. I love your use of dialogue, and your original characters are well defined and believable. Keep this going. You have great talent, and I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Really good story! please keep going.

AWESOME ! and dark update soon pleasse !

really really good

you allready know i love this wish you could update sooner...can you be bribed?

Fascinating! Absolutely brilliant written and so well described. I can't help imaging HIM... Please update soon.

One word to the size of the pages: Any chances to make it up in a size where it is not necessary to scroll left and right? Page-fitted design? Would be more comfortable. Thanks!