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for Using Restraint

by Lee

person Lee
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for pointing that out to me, I havent had this story beta'd and wasn't sure about using that word. I've since edited it out. Thanks again
person anonymous
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the whole concept of the story and Rodney's dominance. The only catch I had was when Rodney called him 'whore'. It's seems so insensitive and harsh even with the submission thing and not something I see either man using. Other than that I loved it. The descriptions were vivid and erotic and the action hot.