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Her intelligence, temper, willpower and courage were qualities he admired about her. As well as her great ass.
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i so totally love this chapter. his thoughts are excellent. i was so excited to see an update, this has become one of the stories i very much look forward to reading! :)

OK ,i hope you all like this . if you can suffer though i have chapter 3 planned out. your reviews have really incouraged me to continue -- thank you and enjoy

omg that was really hot thanks for the update

this was a hot update great story

I'm completely in love with this story. I love Beka/Rhade so much and was absolutely delighted to find that another one had been written! Your descriptions are wonderful. I always love stories that involve a sexual power struggle between an instinct dominated alpha and his potential mate. My most favourite stories:)
I loved these lines:
"Slutty Stud Muffin Exposed"
"Telemachus apparently was displaying for her. "
Display away Majorum, she's masturbating to your image. If Beka's gonna be with a Nietzschean, why not one she knows? He would of course might start thinking she found him inferior. No one could be more superior!
You're doing another chapter right? Right?! Please do. This story is excellent. You have completely made my day :D

thanks for reading and reviewing.yes i am going to continue this but i need some background info on both Rhade characters to do it right.if you have watched the series regularly and would like to help alittle contact me please.it will take some time as i write longhand and a friend types it for me. also -archive ,download,print out and pass around any of my stories--just read and enjoy myladymystere@earthlink.net

hi, I wanna know if this is a short fanfic or if It's going to continue, I like it. Maybe a sequel with the thoughts and reactions of Rhade...

And where did he shop-Slutty Stud Muffin Exposed?
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oh my gosh, this is so hot! ooooh, and when he was there at the end, oh i shivered! amazing. i like how the conversation with dylan, very cool. i lvoe it! can't wait for more.

i love beka/rhade fics hope you`ll write more

i love Beka`s fantasizes about Rhade I hope I can read about Rhade`s fantasizes about Beka too.