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for What To Do?

by SFPANTHER

person DfwPhoenix
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more and more... the phone ringing cliff hanger made me groan with frustration... more more more!!!!!!!!!
person Lyric
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn woman!!! always leaving me hangin'!!! lol.. need more!!
person Beth
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, that was good! You must write another chapter like what happens the next day. We must have second chapter!
person Alauralen
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another kick ass chapter!! I am so glad that they, at least for the moment, got rid of that bitch!! I hope that Mary tells them soon that she is ill, she needs to have her family supporting her right now. I absolutely LOVED this chappie and look forward to many more!! I love you! Hugs and kisses! *still waiting patiently for the smut*

Blessed be,
Alauralen
person Alauralen
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read chapters 5 and 6 and I loved them. I don't watch the show, but Paulie seems to be very sweet! I want to bitch slap Whitney! Update as soon as you are able, I can't wait to get to the sex! Awesome job! I'm glad that she believed him and every thing is all right! Love ya!
person Crye 4 Me
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Oh, Oh. Good story. I may not watch OCC much but I like this story. Hom pregnancy for a quarter mill, I don't know. I may not do it for that price but I know people who would and I would hold nothing against tham.
person Lyric
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more!!!!!!!!!!
person Alauralen
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chappie, very well written. I would so do it for the quarter of a mil!!! Love the chappie and am going on to the next!!! Keep it up!!! Can't wait to see what happens when they meet!!! LOl!!! this is great!! Love ya, hugs and kisses!!!

Blessed be,
Alauralen

P.S. My damn werewolf!!!! ;)
person Alauralen
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! That was great!!1 I would be soooo pissed!!!! I loved the chappie, excellent as always!!! Keep it up, can't wait for the next chappie!!! I want to know whether or not she goes through with it!!! Keep up the good work and update soon!!! I love ya, hugs and kisses!!!

Blessed be,
Alauralen
person Alauralen
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you go girl!!! I love the way that court hearing went!!! That freaking slimeball deserves to have his shit chopped off!!! I HATE men who cheat!!! At least she got everything and he got squat, that is what I like to see!!!!

Going to the next chappie now!!!! Very well written beginning, I totally love it!!! Keep up the good work!!! I love ya, hugs and kisses and all naughty wishes!!!

Blessed be,
Alauralen