schedule
June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Your descriptions are mouth-watering. Some sex, please.
schedule
November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are going to continue this,aren't you....?
Yes, off course you are :) You have to!! I love this chapter, and would like to read some more chapters :)
So, please, write further
Hugs
K
Yes, off course you are :) You have to!! I love this chapter, and would like to read some more chapters :)
So, please, write further
Hugs
K
schedule
June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh baby, this is hot! Love that you clarified it's the REAL BG, lol! And picturing Starbuck and Apollo, rowr rowr. I have a few suggestions though: have someone beta read it, or look it over one more time. Couple of little things, like you used "be" instead of "he" at least once. It's "reveled" not "reviled" (quite a big difference in meaning!) And it's "accentuated." Just a few little things like that. All-in-all, though, I really enjoyed it. Would've given it a Five rating if not for the slight spelling and grammar errors.