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for Tamera-and-Tyreke??

by jadesgirl

person Juvarni
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why did you put hyphens inbetween all of the words. That makes it really difficult to read and quite distracting.
person Kimmie
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tyreke should make it up to Tia with a weekend away in a kingsize bed :)
person arturo
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sister sister should be hot I mean hot.....nice try though and perhaps you will get better with more stories.
person ShyDemonicGirl
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate to sound mean, but that was horrible.
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What's up with the hyphen between every word?
person Pips
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most horrible stories I have ever read.

"Tamera-Campbell-laid-on-her-bed-masturbating-and-moaning-her-sister-Tia's-boyfriend-Tyreke's-name." That made absolutely no sense what-so-ever.

It was very hard to read and understand it correctly with your crappy layout also.