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for Pretty Toy

by TheRedBluebell

person Mu-chan
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this.

Where are you from? Your grammar is OK but your misspellings are strange.
person Crystal
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it's a pretty good story. But hun, you are in desperate need of a beta. It was very hard to understand, and there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors in the story. I give it three.
~CS~
person reviewer
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I tried to read your fic, but it has so many spelling mistakes that I got frustrated and gave up on it. Try running it through a spellcheck or maybe getting a beta reader to help you.