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by Slater

person kamadi
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OKayy, I'm reviewing......now where's the second chapter? (looks demanding but hopeful........that's better than begging isn't it?). Really I'm interested in how you are going to unfold the story so please update soon.
Looking forward to read more!

Kamadi
person Emma
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like!!! I never saw it coming but good fic well done!!
person Lily Evans1
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*¬* yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!! It's so coooooooooooool *¬* I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Akira, Vegeta\'s granddaughter (o la nieta de Vegeta)
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!! It's really fantastic! I love it!^_^ please, update express!!