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for Gordo's Mistake

by Talonrv

person The PD
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! Lmao... i love Lizzy getting givin to Mellanie... More on that if you please :P
person John
schedule March 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You GOTTA continue this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue this story, it's excellent!
person UH
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great. It's not so dirty as some other stories published here. Great work.
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey were you ever going to finish this story?
person Aff.net moderator
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person crumbobulus
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting turn of events... cant wait to see what you do next
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, at last--sensless PWP that's actually fairly well written. Finish, please.
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats good you should writ more
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE, your story is driving me insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sapsapsap
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, I like the setup, keep it going