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really good fan fic...but it needs an ending!!!!

arrrgg you got to continue!! This tale has me totally entranced and I am sitting here hoping desperately that you haven't abandon this FIC. I love the way you have captured the dynamic between Rose & the Dr and I Love you bringing Susan back into the picture I don't think I ever saw any episodes where he went back for Susan and have been wondering for ages what happened to her particularly with all the "I'm the only one left stuff" Awaiting future chapters with baited breath!!

XLF

Great story hon, really enjoying it

Aha! I was thinking about this fic all day - no joke.

Seriously - middle of my chemistry exam this afternoon, I was getting flashes of this fic and imagining jealous!Doctor. It made me grin heartily, but then I had to force myself to stop cos I'm always worried that if a teacher sees me grinning in an exam, they'll think I'm gleefully reading the answers off the side of my shoe, or something.

Anyway, this chapter - yummy. Especially the kiss at the end.

Ooh, another thing I was thinking about from this fic - the line, can't remember which chapter it was in, but it was the bit where Susan suggests that the Doctor leave Rose in 21st century London, and he says, "My lifw wouldn't be worth living" - I absolutely adored that line.

OK, I have a feeling that this site doesn't tell authors which reviews go with which chapter, so I'm reviewing chapter 8, FYI, and why would we kill you? I loved this one. I don't think I've ever read a fic where the Doctor and Rose actually broke up. But jealous!Doctor is the most brilliant ingredient you could ever include, and if I could inject him straight into the vein, I would, but I can't. Loved this chapter. I *need* more. Like, actually need it to the point where I may well have to kidnap you and make you my fanfic bitch. (Can't remember the title of the film that this ties in with, but I have seen it, and ... *drools over Edward*... good one.)

This is a great fic. I don't normally like original characters in fics but, I overlook your OC because of the great storyline. You managed to combine my favourite Doctor with one of my favourite films. Very well done. Hope the next update is soon :)

What's she doing?! Bah! Silly, silly Rose. And stupid Doctor! ;) Great stuff. Looking forward to more ;)

Still loving this fic ;-)

Somebody's been watching "A Knight's Tale" I see. Hehe. Awesome Chapter!

That does it. I'm printing this fic off and carrying it around with me, because this chapter just cracked me up. The Jack/Doctor and Rose/Susan scenes? Inspired! Amazing! Nine lives on in this fic.