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for Back at Square One

by TwistedWorld

person xfaytx
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so, i think i checked this site like a billion times today to see if u had updated...... AND U DID!!! HELL YEAH!!! loved it, baby!! i read this chapter like 349820348920384 times!!! over and over and over again!!! hehe! poor chris! they were so brutal!!! (but u know we all love chris as the damsel in distress! hehe... he's just so cute/hot!!)

and wyatt!!! i love him in this story! sarcastic and caring towards his brother yet still scary dictator guy!

LOVED IT BABE!!!
person Avalon
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Awesome story. Loved it!
person Mischa
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update more since this is pretty good!
person jaime
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! nice start! definately got my attention with this one~ hoping to see an update real soon!
person xfaytx
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can tell this is gonna be an awesome story! nice job on the details! loving chris sooo much.... ::sigh:: hehe, hope u write more REALLI REALLI REALLI soon..... like say... today? hahaha