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for Back at Square One

by TwistedWorld

person xfaytx
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
an update! SCORE! i like how u made chris so flexible, it was so hot! ahh! i could just melt. loved the last bit where chris spied wyatt but wyatt just left. for a second i though he would give in. how're u gonna follow with the next chapter? cant wait to see!
person winter
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.... and hope you'll update more. Do you know of any other place i can get Chris fanfic's?
person shuchan
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whistle* nice! i have waoted sooooooooooo long for this chapter!! i can hardly wait for the next one!
person jaime
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i forgive u cause of that awesome chapter~ haha. but seriously, that was great! more wyatt and chris action, LOVED IT! hehe. loved the kinkiness as well~ suggestions..... i cant think of ne.... just keep doing wat u've been doing~ its all great!
person xfaytx
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! u updated! a lil slow on the update..... but its alright. i loved the chapter though~! it was amazing! chris was as HOT as ever! loved him. loved how u made everything so suspensful!! cause i keep craving wanting to read more! so, if u please.... UPDATE SOON!
person CAY
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great, please update soon
person James
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! Love the details!!! Have you done any with leo and chris?
Keep up the writing!!
J
person Jaime
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why are u thanking us?? we should be thanking u! that was SOOO awesome! my favorite chapter so far. it had everything i wanted. AND it was SUPER long! yeah! hehe.... u made chris seem ten times hotter in that chapter! is that even possible?? haha. but it was FANTASTIC! i have no problem reviewing as long as u keep writing! and soon!! hehe~
person xfaytx
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::ding ding ding:: i think we have a winner! omg, no joke. that was my super-all-time-favorite-chapter.... i just loved it like crazy! i read each and every word carefully cause i didnt want to miss ne thing... but damn, it was fantastic! chris strugling was hot but chris and wyatt in that last part was hot too! loved every aspect of it!! hehe~ him and wyatt together are just great! thanks for yet another amazing chapter! hope to see another soon! love ya!
person antarianprincess85
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U know i love this story so much it keeps getting hotter, dont leave us in suspence 4 long.

Laters.