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for One Step at a Time

by Dhvana

person Electra
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And still I'm trying to download this song from the net. Without success. What a mess.
person Electra
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Dhvana! Thank you for this chapter. Until told anything else, I will be sure he will make it. And thank you for not writing a phony storyline. It is a vivid relationship and there must be problems to solve. After all, humans are making mistakes, aren't they? But still they are adaptive and so we will see what will happen next. I'm looking forward to it. *hug* Electra
person Electra
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally the next chapter. - And by the way, how are your studies? -

Okay, he's not dead and I hope you will leave it by that. I couldn't stand Greg suffering that loss. And I would like the idea of Warrick and Nick... But anyway, just let Jack recover and be okay soon. Greg needs him. Warrick, too. And someone with that devotion to music shall not die.

Oh fine, that will be a very thrilling night, with all the thinking about how it will go on.... *sigh*

But thank you for the update despite your studies and I hope you will write more soon. I enjoy your work and like the slow development of the charas and the plot. Brilliant!
person Electra
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, don't kill him!!! I like him and Greg loves him and you can't be that cruel, can you???

But nevertheless I can't wait the next chapter; an amazing story, written very well and well built up storyline. Don't let us wait to long...

Greetings from Germany!
person ZL
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have followed your story for quite awhile now just didn't have the time to review. Haha. Hmm, I really love it, but this chapter! Oh my gosh, I wasn't expecting that much angst, agh! Will Jack die? I hope not.

ZL
person Electra
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work! Although I kind of missing the descriptive scenes I must admit that the development of this relationship is much more interesting. I can see all that vividly before my eyes and I can nearly hear them... Please don't let us wait too long for an update!