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for One Step at a Time

by Dhvana

person Electra
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And right as I thought about just stepping into the plot and starting to shake some sense into Jack, you made Gil doing it. Well done, mistress. But this confession about Gil being in his mind--- Guess we're expecting interesting developments in the next chapters, don't we?

Now that I'm thinking that whole thing over: Still want to slap some sense in their heads... But I'm willing to wait what you're having in mind for them.

Thank you!

Hugs and love from Electra!
person Electra
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally a real conversation and a light at the end of the tunnel, but I think their way is not made until now - or am I mistaken?
Great work, the waiting was worth it.

I also hope that your studies are still successful as you wrote us and would like to hear from you soon.

Love, Electra
person yoblossom
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0.0 so is he like... going to leave them? what's he doing?! you have to write some more! please! and i'll still be here when you update again, cause i love this story!
person Electra
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is going to be ugly, this cliffhanger... But I honestly hope they all will be alright. You don't let happen anything to Jack again, do you? I like the idea of them three being happy.

Thanks for the update and I'm dying to read more soon! *hug*

Electra
person yoblossom
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! a nother wonderfully done chapter! I cannot wair for you to write more good chapters! I just hope that Greg, Warrick and Jack can get things back to normal... it's all very sad...
person yoblossom
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story and am gagging for more!
person Electra
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HURRAH!!!

An update, and I must say this is promising to get very interesting... Glad to read that Jack ist still on his road back to happiness even with some weird ways around. But you're not planning to separate them? Whatever - thanks for this new chapter and as ever I'm looking forward to the next ones.

*hug*

Love, Electra
person vinchicaangel15
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please Update soon
person Electra
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bitingonnailsforupdate*

You know how to grill your fans, don't you? *lol* Hope to read more soon, I must admit that I'm too curious...

Hugs from Electra!
person Electra
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry, an update. And what kind of update. You rescued Jack!!! *hug* *kiss* *dance* Thank you for it.

And still you have got that feeling for the right things to wirte. Such an incident is really a strong cut in a life and no one can just return to the former life. Will they make it? And what about Nick? We well see - stay tuned, folks.

Greetings from me to this wonderful author!